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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-30 |
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| I would love to see the healed picture, but as of now this piece is shaded with the same tones throughout and everything jumps out and so there is no focus. The background should be much lighter and foreground crisp. Technique is wonderful though |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-30 |
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| I'm not a fan of this. It started out well in the progression shots and then went completely flat on you. From a distance it's one big mess of black and dark green. I think that the attempt to rework went very wrong. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-30 |
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| can't really tell much from the photo, but looks like a nice start. I would love to see the progression. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-30 |
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| For your 3rd tattoo, this is beautiful. The only thing I would say is to watch your linework. Looks like some is pretty aggressive and blown out. Take your time and build your lines and sharped... not necessarily needing to happen in one pass |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-30 |
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| Beautifully done. I'm not a huge fan of the cast shadow under the neck... kinda looks out of place, But overall, this is a nicely laid out piece. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-30 |
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| Looks clean. My only issue would be the letter spacing in the word "Strong" it's pretty tight and will most likely be an issue soon. Well done though |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-30 |
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| ....but worth it. This is well done. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-30 |
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| Oh oh... looks like we've got ourselves a comment deleter here. This looks like an amateur's cover up. When in doubt cover it with solid black. The entire piece does not flow at all ans is not done well. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-30 |
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| what I mean is you made this into an entire scene that fits together nicely. The foreground image is definitely the Tiger, but flows nicely with the new sunset. I think you made a great choice |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-30 |
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| Thank you for your service dude... I mean that. The linework on the leaves is good... not so much for the bayonet. Overall this piece is pretty flat. Definitely fixable, and I would take it to someone who can make it really dynamic and sweet |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-30 |
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| Hahaha, Yessir! There's a guy posting lately that is filled with horrifying tattoos that don't look anything like what they are intended to be... look more like goats nuts :) |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-30 |
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| Why is it that you guys post here to have your ink rated and then you get an honest one, you delete the comment? Seems to me you don't want to hear it. You don't have to open these up to comments... The lettering is too aggressive and blown out. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-30 |
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| Comment deleter :( Look dude, this tattoo is rough but fixable. The linework is shaky and the fills aren't done properly. You can't change that now, but you can get it fixed. It's not doomed |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-30 |
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| I hear ya. I think the black and grey would have looked fine with just the red mask... would have offset nicely. But that green in the back is not cool at all. The saturation in the red mask is pretty rough... but this can all be fixed. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-30 |
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| The detail looks really good. Hopefully it's really fresh and will heal a bit lighter, but overall this is really good. |
