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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-29 |
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| OK, I'm sorry dude, but this is a mess. Your linework is really bad, and the fills are not good either. Your shading in the roses is totally choppy and amateur. The entire piece is way too heavy and masculine. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-29 |
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| 10 years and looking clean. Take it in and get some freshness in it... maybe color? you look fair skinned, so color would be your friend. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-29 |
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| I'm not diggin this. It's pretty base and is lacking in contrast and seems far too light. The flow of the whole piece isn't flying with me either. It doesn't fit your body flow. Sorry, probably not what you were expecting... but true. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-29 |
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| The linework is really clean. I believe it needs a ton more shading, as the whole image is really flat right now. Nice work though. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-29 |
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| Wow, this is the first story that made me stop and actually feel instead of critique. That's a terrible tragedy brother. That's really all i'm gonna say. My heart is broken for you. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-29 |
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| I would love to see the progress. As it stands now.... the linework is RUUUU-UUUF. Shaky. Could be just a baseline but we'll have to see after it's colored |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-29 |
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| Great looking polynesian! Some of those lines are a bit wobbly but overall it's good. Was it done traditional tap/stick style?? |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-29 |
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| I like the wings from your other pics. I'm not sure how I feel about the layout of the footprints though. It seems a bit unbalanced. BUT... are you about to pole dance?? And what's Butt Shorts doing over there? What kind of party is this???!!! |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-29 |
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| That's a nice clean tattoo. Great lines and fills. I love the highlights around the blue/grey coloring. Way too much ointment on there though. :) |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-29 |
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| Oh, sorry mike, I assumed you did it. The contrast I'm referring to would be adding darker shades of color around the metal mask to give it a more 3D feel, not necessarily blacks but dark gunmetal and greys |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-28 |
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| The whole image is a bit flat. I would say that there needs to be some depth brought into the eyes and contrast were the metal goes back into the hood. Check your source photo and look at the eyes again they could use some livening up. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-28 |
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| Nice clean linework. Well done. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-28 |
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| Very nice. It's a well done portrait. I would say another sitting is in order to bring out the contrast in the suit a bit, but it's a very nice piece. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-28 |
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| Not bad. Looks like you may have some blow out at the tips of the legs but overall this is nicely done. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-28 |
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| Hahaha! Nice. I was wondering what you were trying to say. This is absolute crap. The linework, even though it's supposed to look abstract I'm assuming, is dirt poor... and in a shop no less!!! |
