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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-28 |
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| This looks really nice. The linework is a bit shaky but this is a really nice 3D looking piece. Well Done! |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-27 |
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| OK, I love the piece. The shading is beautiful and the fit on your back is wonderful. The issue I have is that the cross does not line up to your spine at the bottom. With a full back this will diminish, but it's off by quite a bit. I really like it though |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-27 |
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| It looks like it's coming along beautifully. I would only say that the contrast should be beefed up in the overlaps of the feathers to make everything pop out more. Great start!! |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-27 |
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| Hahaha, Grammar I'll be corrected on ya hillbilly. But what I will not be corrected on is an eye for a talented artist. Just continue your game SISTER, I don't need approval from you. So keep following me around like a dog. I'll throw you a scrap or two. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-27 |
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| It looks really good. I like the coloring and the layout. It's very feminine and is a wonderful piece. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-27 |
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| OK, so if this piece is any indication of your last one, the work you are getting done is really bad. The linework in this one is horrible and shaky and the overall design is flat and lacks definition. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-27 |
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| I would like to see a better/clearer shot of this. As it stands now it looks like a really big mess. Linework looks shoddy and the whole design looks misshapen and inconsistent. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-27 |
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| The camo work is really good. It looks like the saturation went really well. The linework is clean. It's a browning logo.... but it's well done. :) |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-27 |
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| The only thing I would say would be to have your artist take the dot on the eye a little lower and smaller (But in proportion) so that it doesn't meet the crossbar on the "F" like that. AND find a good artist to do this. Browse portfolios. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-27 |
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| You should post a healed pic. Right now it looks like the entire piece is so overly dark that it's hard to distinguish the incredible imagery going on. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-27 |
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| You need to do some hand/foot/anatomy studies. The shading is decent but your anatomy needs work. The hand holding the sword is disfigured and the feet look awkward. Your fine linework is good though. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-27 |
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| This piece isn't that bad. You'll need heavier contrast with another sitting, your mis tones will be too light when healed. Your linework is good though. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-27 |
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| OK, so first the anatomy of the whole piece is skewed. Your linework is not consistent and shaky. You only have heavy tones, and no mids to lights at all. You went way too heavy with your white. It should be used as highlight only in B&G not full coloring. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-27 |
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| Very nice! It's a very well done tattoo and you should be proud of it. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-27 |
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| This is a very good B&G piece. Very soft and looks very well done. |
