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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-20 |
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| This piece is nicely done. You will most likely have to go back in and beef up the contrast, but overall this is a good looking piece. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-20 |
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| This piece flows beautifully on the hand. Great fine detail and the shadowing is smooth. I would venture to guess that this is one of your more recent pieces. The skill level has improved tremendously. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-20 |
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| Your linework needs help, but that can be cleaned up in another session. Can't really tell saturation levels here but looks pretty nice. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-20 |
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| Looks pretty clean. The saturation needs work, but overall a nice tribal piece. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-20 |
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| The linework is not clean. It is pretty shaky. You should work all this stuff out on paper before diving in to skin. Put a pen in your tube vise and work with that for your sketches, it will help with confidence for longer linework. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-20 |
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| From this pic, this one looks pretty good. Shading looks solid and the coloring is nice. would like to see a better close up though. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-20 |
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| The layout of this piece doesn't fit with the body at all. Saturation isn't there and needs to be reworked. I would be careful with the use of so much white pigment, as it will yellow fairly quickly. It should be used for basic highlights and not big fills |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-20 |
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| once again skill level cannot be rated on this photo. Take some better pics so we can see the stuff up close. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-20 |
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| can't really tell from this shot. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-20 |
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| From this distance it seems good. A clearer, higher rez shot would allow for a better critique. Nicely laid out though. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-20 |
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| This one is a mess. The linework is terribly blown out and the shading is far too dark and blotchy. This was way overworked and your ink did not take well. This is for lack of skill. There are ways to practice what you are doing before diving into skin. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-20 |
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| The shading on this one is a bit rough. Could use another pass with more contrast and finer details as well. Good start though. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-20 |
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| Not bad for a freehanded piece. The entire tattoo is in desperate need of finer details but the depth overall is really good. Great flow on the body and a really nice B&G piece. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-20 |
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| Did you freehand this, or make an actual stencil? This piece is lacking in so many ways, there are no mid tones and the anatomy of the piece is way off base. It does not do your sketch any justice at all. It's a mess |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-20 |
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| That s a beautiful piece. Great saturation and stunning linework. Really nice piece. |
