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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-13 |
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| Home Made. The linework is really bad and the overall technical aspects of this piece are horrible. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-13 |
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| Linework is clean... looks good. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-13 |
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| linework and shading are beautiful, The anatomy on the facial features is a bit off and the features are too hardlined but it's overall, a beautiful piece. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-13 |
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| It's coming along really well. The shading is a bit harsh and hard edged... can be softened up still. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-13 |
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| Looks really well laid out. You're killin it with all the sun though. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-13 |
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| Very clean, classy and well done. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-13 |
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| Looks very clean and beautifully done. Great work! |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-10 |
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| For sure. The linework is real rough too. Some areas being very blown out... way too deep there. Put a pen in your tube vise and practice smooth lines with your machine weight hanging off the back of a pen... it'll do you wonders |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-10 |
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| This way you don't have to try and go back over a line to saturate it. Thin lines need to be a one pass deal. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-10 |
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| ...just a bit... not slippery but a smooth glide will help you twist and create nice swooping smooth lines. Keep it up, you'll get there |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-10 |
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| No i see that for sure in your work posted. The smaller the needle grouping the more your flaws will show. On tiny lines like this, you need to insure a one pass saturation. Try a little ointment on the base of your machine hand so your glove slides ... |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-10 |
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| Strong brother! that looks really good and clean. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-10 |
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| follow those great lines in your back. The blades down through your lats... |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-10 |
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| You need to do an entire upper back piece playing off of that negative space Pos/Neg feel. Everything around the devil character would be lightly shaded and good, and then the other side would be demon scenes in heavy darks, it would really balance this |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-08-10 |
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| looks nice too. Good heart AND Money?? I wish the best for you dude! |
