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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| The linework is rough, but fixable. I love the piece, you'll need another sitting to build up those lines though. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| Yes it is. This is very choppy and honestly, awkwardly placed. It's gonna take some serious thought to smooth out those blends |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| This is pretty good looking. I really like the dark and light portions of the entire sleeve... it plays well together. Well done. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| Looks good. Great linework and good saturation in color. Well Done! |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| Linework is getting better, your shading needs a lot of work. Hold your machine real light. start at your darkest point and bring your needles up and out of the skin gradually, then move out a little to extend those shadows... start diluted your blacks too |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| Turn your machine down and work slower building up those dark and mid tones. It looks to me like you're trying to work to fast. Speed will come with experience not the other way around. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| Very interesting and artistic piece. It's done well as far as the shading is concerned. The linework is a bit aggressive and blown out but overall, this is a very cool piece. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| The piece is beautiful for sure. My only issue is that the jaguars need to be shaded... they look a bit flat. This is an enormous piece and is superbly laid out... you probably need another 10 hours to make it astonishing though. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| This one is not bad at all.... you are improving well by this piece. Good work... your shading is very nice. Well done |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| Decent cover. Next sitting should be done with a heavy opaque light lavender and then tip off those pedals closest to you with pure white highlights. It'll make this piece pop |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| realistic shading is your bag dude, linework... not so much. Draw with a pen in your vice so you can get used to the weight of your machine while doing straight lines. A little ointment under your hand helps to get a good slide as well. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| This is a nice piece. Great contrast and depth. I love the dynamics of it. Well Done. Your linework is a bit choppy but nothing horrible, that can be worked out. I would say another sitting making that eye a bit more rounded with shading. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| Linework is terrible. You are not ready for intricate design yet |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| This one is not too bad. Technicals need help but it's better than most of your work. Stick with things like this for now until you improve your skills. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| At least some of these are your own skin, but every one of these will be a regret later. |
