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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| You are definitely not showing your talent... you are showing everything that shouldn't be done. If you're gonna work out of your house, you have an obligation to be better than the guys at a shop. You need to wait. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| Color theory is also very important. This is a mess. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| This is an infection waiting to happen. Way too aggressive in your color packing. This is not good work. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| Look, I'm not one to bag on where you get your start... but you shouldn't be tattooing skin yet. These kinds of practice runs should be done on non-human canvases. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| You have to know how bad these are. You should not be practicing on people... this is all stuff for fake skin and fruit... NOT real people. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| You should be working your technique out on paper first. These lines are horrible and the entire design is bad. These are all pieces of work that will never be fixable. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| This is real rough brother. The design is not great and the technicals are very lacking. This is very amateur and shouldn't have been done on real skin yet. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| This however is absolutely beautiful. Well done! Even your linework here is really good. I'm guessing that this is one of your latest pieces. Good job! |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| Simple and yet beautiful. Well done |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| Yea... linework is rough for sure and the letter spacing is less than desirable... but it's in there and not horrible. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| Well... first off the proportions are off. This needed to be a complete symmetrical piece and it didn't work. The linework is rough and the shading is pretty choppy. Not great. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| Good for you on fake skin. Go very easy with your shading. Light handed multiple passes, set your machine soft and just do soft wispy passes. Keep practicing, you'll get it. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| Looks beautiful as it is now. I'm worried what it will look like totally healed. I would have liked more contrast in it... just a bit, but I really like it. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| This is a big piece and unfortunately is pretty rough. I believe it is fixable but as it stands this is not very well done. Linework is wobbly and the shading is real choppy. |
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TheTruthHurtsSometimes |
2012-11-26 |
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| It's a decent piece. The shading will need to be heavier for sure and the detail in the hair is lacking... overall the proportions are nice though. |
