Don't get all upset now, the linework is wobbly, that's all. If you didn't want a real evaluation, you shouldn't have posted it. I don't know everything for sure, but being a tattooer longer than you've been alive... I've learned a few things
Awesome idea... horrible linework. Not smooth and flowing as the design calls for. But don't worry, my friend VD will post shortly encouraging you... Just my own critique