We all know that vines have ten times more leaves than that too. And maybe a darker forest green on the border of the clover with hints of white. Don't take anyone's comments too hard but maybe use it to come up with new ideas to fix it or for a new one.
Its a great idea with all good intentions in mind to get something with your heritage and your kids initials. But you really should get it touched up. You need more of a twist on the leaves and vines. Have them twirl and dance a little more..