Not a big fan of traditional (Japanese is my thing) but this looks amazing. Colours are spot-on as is the design itself with how the horses heads r linked. Would love to see your sleeve when its outlined/coloured so post some pix. Check mine out if poss :)
Looks OK from what you can see. I've given it a 7 based on what i can mentally picture but post a close up and i bet it wud definetely be at least an 8 or a 9. Maybe even a 10. Check mine out if you have time :)